ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.
love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!
this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!
obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!
@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)
omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!
actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]
i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]
i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]
I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!
this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer
beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!
I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!