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my response to the may 6th prompt! kind of a simple one but https://cassava.neocities.org/muse
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hi! i'd love to join! my button is on my site's main page, and my muse page is on my site's "map". I had a lot of fun writing for this weeks prompt ^^ https://cassava.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
1 week ago
I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!
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manyface
1 week ago
oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.
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finished changing my blog's look and i really like it. but i'm still not sure what i'm going to use it for lol. more soon
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I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!
i like this a lot!!! it's very powerful and visceral and i enjoy that about poetry in general, so well done :D - j